I think it might help to see some of the more directly surrounding areas, such as where the young people hang out (the ledge). Just a slight extension might provide some visual context for how to understand the significance of the river. Or perhaps a collage with some accompanying images to get a sense of the place. As of right now, it's a bit difficult to mentally visualize how this river fits physically/geographically within the context of the town. Where is the factory? Where is the town center?
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