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MohamedAmir VtP Annotation

I think the caption does a nice job of presenting the ongoing conflict over representation and the precarious futures of both the smelting operation and the community around it.  With that said, I might recommend striving for a more even balance of text devoted to the environmentalists' position (which currently predominates the caption) and the locals' perspective (which is currently relegated to a brief pair of concluding sentences.

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