My main suggest, which I already mentioned, is to further contextualize the image, perhaps in the introductory caption. Otherwise, this image-text combination seems to me to be really well paired. If I were asked to brainstorm further changes, or an additional collage that might have similar ends, I might suggest overlaying the historic scene with the contemporary one through a play on opacities, so that both old and new constructions can be seen standing in the same spots.
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